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Sunday, April 29, 2012

Developing Character Traits and the Loving Warmth of Gingerbread

How do you develop your character traits?  Do you invent them?  Are they a composite of people you've seen or know?  Are they modeled after you or someone dear to you?  Do you research personalities?  Do you keep a profile on your characters?
 

There are many good articles on the internet on how to develop your characters if you're not sure.

I have an outline I use, and one of the most important questions on it is what is the character's zodiac sign?  Yes, that's what I said, I use the Western Zodiac to help define my character, and I build from there.

Meet one of my minor characters, Tillie Duff.  When I came up with the idea of Tillie, I looked for a strong atrological sign and decided Tillie is a Sagitarius.  Here are some basic attributes of a Sagittarian:
 

Good                                                                   Bad
Quirky                                                                Depressed
Optimistic                                                          Overly optimistic
Adverturous                                                       Irresponsible
Kind-hearted                                                      Tactless
Craves freedom                                                  Restless
People person                                                     Takes people/things for granted
Charming                                                            Lacks tact
Friendly, talkative                                               Outspoken

Of course, there are more traits, but these alone help me to build my character.  Tillie is from one of the oldest and wealthiest families in England.  When she became of age, she received her share of the money and promptly moved to a small village about an hour's drive away.  Sh's very attached to her family and sees them often, but she had to exert her freedom and head into her own adventure.

Known by anyone as the quirkiest of the Duffs, you never know what Tillie is going to say or do.  Although she is a people person and has many friends, she can be quite tactless, especially if angered.  And she has a quick temper that flares immediately.  When she is through being angry, she goes back to being her fun loving self.

Added characteristics:

The above would give anyone a fair idea of Tillie.  Quite the looker in her younger days, we meet her in my novel 'Always' when she is in her 50's.  Don't let her age fool you, she is high-spirited and high maintenance.  Her fortune is gone.  No one other than Tillie knows why, and it's not until later in the book that we discover the answer.  Tillie takes pride in everything she does, and she keeps no secrets, except where her money went.

Tillie is single, so she has no children.  Every summer she has her great-niece, April from the States stay with her.  Best not hurt April in any way, or you'll answer to Tillie.  Well, Tillie is specific who she likes and who she doesn't like, so don't hurt anyone she adores.  She'll help you hurt the other group by providing you with some witty insults.

Tillie has a habit of slamming her hand down hard on a table when she wants to make a point.  This trait came from my step-mother, Ellie, who always slammed her hand down on a table.  Everyone jumped, but she didn't notice.  Ellie also spoke loudly, and so does Tillie.  I gave Tillie these traits to honor my step-mother.  Look how great character development can be?  It can allow you to preserve personalities through your writing.

Tillie isn't the greatest cook in the world, but one thing that she bakes is delicious.  And that's her gingerbread.  When I was a child, I fell in love with gingerbread.  In the fall and winter months, it's perfect for serving in any form.  Gingerbread takes many ingredients.  Among them, molasses and spices like clove, ginger, cinnamon, and or nutmeg.  I call these the warming spices because their taste is so strong, it seems to warm you on cold days.  And this is where I got the idea for Tillie.  She always has gingerbread ready for anyone who happens to drop by.  She sends April back to the States with a package of gingerbread every time, and she makes sure to send more as needed.

As I say, nothing baked says love like soft gingerbread.
So now that I've explained how I came up with Tillie Duff, let's take a look at her through the eyes of the reader:

(Simon speaking) 
     “I look forward to seeing your Aunt Tillie.  I never know what she will say.”

    
“Do you want a slice of Aunt Tillie’s gingerbread?  I…I helped her make it.”  April blushed, as she leaned in a little too close to Simon.
“Great.”  Dixon grabbed a slice and sat back down.  “Who doesn’t like Aunt Tillie’s gingerbread?” 
 
“Here, Dixon, a second cup of Aunt Tillie’s tea is more suited to you.” Simon gave Dixon a warning look.
     Dixon smirked at Simon with a twinkle in his eye.  “No thanks.  Aunt Tillie added a strong dose of brandy to yours.”
     “Aye, I did.  Will shake out whatever’s in you, it will.  It’s my ‘special flavoring.’”
 
“She begged me.  Seems to be important to her.  Aunt Tillie took her side, reminding me that you need to find a spouse and you seem incapable of doing so.   She reckons you’re feeble and shouldn’t be alone.  And I wouldn’t presume to disagree with Aunt Tillie.”

 
The Duffs had built their home on a foundation of happiness and love, and you could count on Duffy or Aunt Tillie to manage the funniest things. 
“Sweet lady.  Crazy she is, and kind to a fault, and I can’t help but admire her.  I have on occasion gone by to see how she gets along.  I must look at every album she has before she will let me leave.  It seems that “Duff love” overflows onto those around them.” 

 
“We are honored with the number of our friends and relatives who are here to attend this blessed event.”
Aunt Tillie yelled, “I came for the wine.” 
Laughter rippled around the room.
 
Cary looked at Simon, surprised.  Neither Simon nor any of the Duffs spoke, except for Aunt Tillie.  She raised her glass to Steven and rather loudly toasted, “To our newest family member, Mr. Rude Bastard.”  Then she took a sip, followed by April and Telulla who both chimed, “Here, here.” 
 
“All I know is what Dad answered whenever we asked a question about her.  ‘Tillie is Tillie.’  I now understand what it means."

 
“That’s the ticket, my dear.  We’ll  invite Dixie over to my house to teach you how to pinch real good.” Aunt Tillie looked at Steven.  “You can tag along.  We need a practice dummy.”

 
“I’ll stay here,” said Aunt Tillie, “and keep the liquor company.”

 Uncle Dixon had sent a brief note.  He reminded her that Aunt Tillie wanted to head to the States to teach her boxing or pinching.

 
“I’ll repeat ‘your Dieu’ and throw in ‘my God.’”  Shouted Aunt Tillie.
 
I still remember his fight with his aunt.  He told her to go pretend to play bridge to get away from you, and he will watch over you like she should have been doing.  She moved so fast.  She chased him outside with her broom, smacking him.”
     April nodded.  “I remember.  I didn’t know Aunt Tillie could run so fast.”

There's plenty of other Tillie surprises in my novel,  As you can see, Tillie is one of my favorite characters, who manages to outshine anyone and usually brings  a lot of humor with her.

What are some ways that you develop your characters?

LHR, and let's PAWS for Success.



20 comments:

Roger Lawrence said...

The best traits of my characters come from how I would like to be. The worst are from the people in my life who have bugged me to the extreme. It's my way of getting back at them.

Katherines Corner said...

mine often come from memories, then are expanded. This was a great post xo

The Desert Rocks said...

I enjoyed the back story and the gingerbread. I could almost smell it. You're a great writer Donna!

Donna Yates said...

The Desert Rocks, thank you for you kind comment.
Katherines Corner, thank you for sharing that. I think it's very common to use our memories.
Roger, you're so funny. Ahem. Thank you for explaining how you develop your characters. I'll be watching to see if any of your characters resemble me.

Jess @ The Secret DMS Files of Fairday Morrow said...

Very cool post, Donna! I enjoyed reading your character development. One of may favorite things to do is to put together words to the picture of a character in my head- it's like fitting the pieces into a puzzle : ) ~ Jess

Sharon's Sunlit Memories said...

This is so interesting Donna - I have never thought of using Zodiac characteristics before! I love the way you have given us the background to the character and then illustrated it with an actual extract. Great passage.

And like you I just adore gingerbread - you will have to give us that recipe sometime - another post maybe?

Joleene Naylor said...

Ha ha! She seems like a lot of fun!

Here is where I have to admit that all my good characters create themselves. Though I once wrote a book when I was 17 based on people I knew.

I have a "notes" file I keep all the details in though.

Donna Yates said...

Jess, thank you for your comment. I love that idea - words to the image, like a puzzle. I love puzzles.

Sharon, thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked this blog. I'll do that as my next post - my favorite gingerbread recipes.

Joleene, I love your sense of humor. Tillie is one of my favorites. You know your characters so well that I can only imagine your notes file is huge. Thank you for your comment.

Barbara said...

What a fascinating post. It's lovely being around so many authors and finding out just how you do it. I struggle with cataloguing books – never mind writing one! But with so much inspiration I might just be tempted to join in.

Ugochi said...

Great story Donna, you are a great writer.I imagined the images while I read, couldn't help it, and that made it more fun.

Donna Yates said...

Ugochi, thank you for visiting my blog and for the lovely comment you left.

Donna Yates said...

Barbara, thank you for commenting. Yes, do join us in writing. I know you have a talent for it!

Stephanie@The Secret DMS Files of Fairday Morrow said...

How fun to see how you figure out the traits of your character. I like to use bits and pieces from people I know- things that stand out to me. Of course, sometimes parts of me show up, too. I love how you mentioned gingerbread- and I have found that when I use food items I have to pick foods that I feel strongly about (for them to eat, cook, etc.). Great post!

Donna Yates said...

Stephanie, thank you for your comment. I love finding out how people develop their characters. And I agree - seems like each character has a part of me in them too.
Wow! Now I know why I pick the foods I do in my stories - they are foods that I feel strongly about.

Melinda McGuire said...

I love the name Tillie :)
It is interesting to me to see how other authors work through their creative processes. Thanks for sharing a "behind the scenes" look.

Donna Yates said...

Melinda, thank you for your comment. I love your guidance on your website - such great information for all writers.

OneMommy said...

I never would have thought about a Zodiac sign being helpful in developing a character - but it makes perfect sense!
I will have to remember that should I ever find time to write!

Donna Yates said...

OneMommy, thank you for your comment. It is hard to find time to write!

Sharon Martin Beck Valley Books said...

Lovely story she sounds like a good sport. If your ever in the UK you will have to pop to Grassmere in the Lake District for their famous Gingerbread !!

Donna Yates said...

Thank you, Sharon, for your comment. Oh my, a place that sells gingerbread? It's now on my list of hope to visit sometime.